Modeling Food for Thought part 19: 11.3.15, 6-8 PM

Makayla’s side

6:14pm

Sigyn Wisch

I got some guy to take pictures of me in the dress

I'll send the pics to you tonight and you can let me know more what you need. These were just samples cause idk wtf I'm doing

Makayla Marie

Lol I'm sure there grate

Sigyn Wisch

I told him to direct the pictures and he was like derp wut

Makayla Marie

Lol

6:33pm

Sigyn Wisch

so yeah there are like 7 pictures and they suck, but I'm hoping you can edit them into something manageable?

Makayla Marie

They look good

Let me see what magic I can do

Sigyn Wisch

alrighty

Makayla Marie

smile emoticon

Sigyn Wisch

^ I stopped caring about 5 minutes into this tbh

lol

how's stuff going on your end?

 7:05pm

Makayla Marie

She's stupid

squint emoticon

She is ugh

I hate her

Madeline

Sigyn Wisch

Oh, okay, thank god

Yeah, Blossom sent me her essay and I kind of glanced at it because my phone was being charitable and let me load it

Makayla Marie

It was shit

Sigyn Wisch

lemme glance it again, one sec

region's, not regions

tbh, the entire first paragraph manages to be both unnecessary and too short

Second Amendment, not "seconded amendment"

'He is defined as the "outlaw" country." makes it sound like Brantley Gilbert is a country, not a person.

"We ha\/e a few things in common" should go before "I agree with him supporting the second amendment" and "we are both January Capricorns"

there does not need to be a quotey before "His first album

and also it should be written as,

His first album, "Modern Day Prodigal son," was

"mid of 2009" is nonsense

*His second album, "Halfway to Hea\/en," was

*March 16, 2010

*"Bottoms Up" turned into

Makayla Marie

That's irlevent

Sigyn Wisch

and actually NONE OF THAT IS NECESSSARY

Makayla Marie

My point

You see it

She's dumb

Sigyn Wisch

... I... kind of

SIGYN

edited it

Makayla Marie

Oh wow

smile emoticon

Sigyn Wisch

I gave her a SLIGHTLY higher grade than y'all did

Blossom’s side

7.42 PM

ME

I looked over Madeline’s essay and added some notes.

+ If Falcon & Wales had graded it (that’s my editing company), we would have given her a D-.

Makayla’s side

7.47 PM

Sigyn Wisch

please don't show it to her

Makayla Marie

I know

Sigyn Wisch

read it and let me know what you think though grin emoticon

Makayla Marie

I like it better then hers

Sigyn Wisch

lel

I had to work hard to stay professional and not go like OKAY WE FUCKING GET IT

Makayla Marie

Lol I did that

Sigyn Wisch

omfg

If I was sporking it, I'd do it like that, but editing it as an editor, I'm going to be as businesslike as possible

There's SOME snark, but it's very mild

MAKAYLA

Makayla Marie

Be came her editing goat

8:01pm

Sigyn Wisch

jfc she's so pretty